Thursday, September 15, 2011

My comments

To Angel Agrawal,
   Very good explanation on your biography. I feel that you really showed your personality through your writing. I feel that your future blogs will be just as entertaining as this one has been. I think you chose a very good book that fits your personality. I can tell that you are a total gun and war head and this book seems to have plenty of that in it.

To Cody Zamora,
   I think you really showed your personality throughout this blog. You made a blog post that didn't describe yourself at all actually interesting. It seems that when you wrote this you were completely out of your comfort zone for essay topics. You did a really good job "winging it". Your biography is overall really good because you give no information about yourself but you actually also tell a lot about yourself. You show that you are more of a guy that keeps people guessing.

To Alex Burke,
 Very good way to show your personality through your writing. It seems like you are a very complex person. You also seem like a very smart guy because you are into band and robotics. You seem to be a very talented person.

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